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my_thestral ([personal profile] my_thestral) wrote 2013-07-20 06:55 am (UTC)

Happy camper

Thank you for your kindness.:)
I'm well aware that there are more than a few elephant-in-a-china-shop paragraphs in this one - I re-read it a few times and every time I did, it came across more childish and overly-sentimental (yes, especially Ron's anger, though that was somewhat deliberate, I wanted him to retort back to his teenager immature self, it just didn't work out that well on the (virtual) paper). Ad to that my complete lack of subtlety and you get a lego house build by a two-year-old.:P
From everything I've ever written this was my favourite idea and the worst execution, but I told myself "screw it", let's get the idea out there, so I can go on and write something else, different, hopefully better.
It doesn't help either that Ron/Harry is not my favourite pairing and I didn't want to get too explicit, but I couldn't imagine Ron having such strong feeling of grief regarding anyone else, ergo - there you go, those two again.
Anyway, thanks for taking the time for reading it and further more, commenting, it's always helpful to get feedback. I hope I didn't totally repulse you with my miserable style (yeah, I know, I know, fishing for compliments...) ;) and see you around!

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